Poem #1 Symphony of the Forest
Symphony of the Forest
Father and I wandered through the forest
Among tall pine trees,
Stately and stark.
Frost covered the ground –
White in patches
Between the trees.
Sunlight filtering
Through the branches,
Lighting a million
Drops of dew
Like so many jewels
Hanging with fragility
On twigs and needle tips.
Sun’s rays catching up
So much beauty
In their arms
And softly caressing them.
The crisp air caught
Our breath
And our hearts
As they jumped to echo the burst
Of a bird call
Somewhere up in the topmost branches.
The sound came like
An unexpected thunder clap,
Clear as a slap
On somebody’s back
And then went
Rumbling, tumbling,
Cascading through the forest
From tree to tree,
On through the cold, crystal air,
Reverberating and resonating
In our ears
And in our hearts
Long after it came
To its symphonic completion.
- All rights reserved.
- Copyright 2006 Trevor W. Hampel
- First published in Expression magazine in 1972.
- It received an honourable mention in the Henderson Memorial Prize for Poetry.
- Read some more of my poetry here.
47 Things About Me
You may be wondering who I am and various things about me. Here is a list of 47 things about me that might not be obvious from my blog.
UPDATE: many items on this list were updated on 28th November 2009.
- I was born in 1947 (sssh – yes – I am THAT old – just keep it quiet)
- I have blue eyes and fair hair. (Update: it’s getting thinner)
- I wear glasses.
- I have been happily married since 1971. To the same person.
- I was a primary school teacher for 35 years until I retired in 2004. Update: in 2012 I was invited to take up a part-time lecturing position at Tabor Adelaide.
- I write poetry and have had many published. In 2009 I won first prize in a major poetry competition.
- I have a great passion for birding.
- I enjoy writing stories and have many published.
- I am a legend in my home town for telling jokes – I’ve have even been a stand-up comic on a number of occasions (but not professionally)
- I collect maps – 100s of them.
- I have trekked the Himalayas as far as Tengboche about 5 days’ walk from Everest base camp.
- I have a daughter who is a high school teacher.
- I have a married son who is a computer whizz (and you thought that I maintained this site????). Update: I now have a grandson and a grand-daughter.
- My wife has a small Australian native plant nursery.
- I live in Murray Bridge, South Australia, 80km east of our state capital city, beautiful Adelaide.
- I help run a poetry reading and critiquing group.
- I spend too much time watching the Australian cricket team.
- I love attending cricket matches at the best cricket oval in the world, the Adelaide Oval.
- I follow the Adelaide Crows in the AFL (Australian Football League).
- I like reading.
- I usually read magazines from cover to cover (if I’ve paid for it I want to get my money’s worth).
- I have a large, growing heap of unread magazines.
- I enjoy reading stories aloud (this comes from reading aloud to my classes while a teacher for so long.)
- I love the smell of rain on dry ground.
- My favourite movie is “Pirates of the Caribbean” but this is subject to change with my mood.
- I love taking my daughter’s dog Nancy for a walk. (Update: sadly Nancy went to Doggy Heaven in 2008. I now walk alone.)
- I have been a member of Birds SA, South Australia’s main birding association, for over 30 years.
- I grew up on a wheat and sheep farm in the Murray Mallee districts of South Australia.
- I once lived in Clare in the mid-north of South Australia, just around the corner from where my daughter now lives!
- My son and daughter-in-law live in Sydney. (Update: they adopted a Colombian boy in 2009 and a girl in 2012 so I’m now a Grand Dad).
- My interest in photography has returned since buying a digital camera in 2005.
- I love sitting in front of a wood fire.
- I love going camping, especially in the Flinders Ranges.
- My first teaching appointment was to Parachilna Rural School, a one teacher school in the Australian outback.
- My favourite bird is the Rufous Fantail, a member of the flycatcher family.
- I am a Life Member of the Adelaide Zoological Society.
- I have been a member of the South Australian Writers’ Centre since about 1992.
- I enjoy watching natural history programmes, especially if they feature birds.
- I am a member of Birds Australia, our largest birding association.
- My favourite animal is the Red Panda; unfortunately I didn’t see one when in Nepal in January 2006.
- I have written four novels and seven picture books for children, as yet unpublished.
- I have had six books published (in the early 1990s now sadly out of print)
- I enjoy watching the Tour de France – and wished I had 1% of their energy and endurance.
- I have an in-ground swimming pool in the garden affectionately known as “Le Swamp” when I don’t maintain it properly.
- I love travelling and my most memorable trip was 2 weeks in Ethiopia, followed by 2 weeks in Morocco and another two weeks in Spain during December – January, 2011-12.
- In February 2008 I went back to university. I am doing my Master of Arts in Creative Writing. It is fun – but hard work. UPDATE: Feb 2011: I passed my degree with a distinction. Yay. UPDATE #2: In February 2012 I was invited to take up a part-time lecturing position at Tabor Adelaide.
- This list started out being called “100 Things About Me” but I ran out of steam at 47, so this is it. Why stop at 47? Well, I was born in 1947, and thinking up a list of 1,947 things about me would mean no-one in their right mind would read it. Besides, that many things about me would be rather silly. So there you have it.
Some of my writing
Regular readers of this blog will already know that I have started posting snippets of my writing on this blog. I have been writing for many years – close to 50 or thereabouts. This means that I have a significant body of work to share with my readers. Some of my poems and stories have already been published in the world of print. Some will only ever reach an audience on the internet. It is becoming increasingly hard to get one’s writing published in magazines these days.
Over the coming weeks and months I plan to regularly post examples of my short fiction, longer stories, poetry, non-fiction and other works as I feel appropriate. The plan is still in its development stages, but at present I will be posting as follows:
- Fridays – general poetry
- Saturdays – Haiku poems
- Sundays – short fiction
As usual, I invite readers’ comments on my writing.
Poems and stories already posted:
The Power of Journal Writing – a Story of Hope
I’d like you to meet Jennifer.
That’s not her real name. I don’t want anyone to be able to identify her.
Jennifer at age seven came into my class as a scared, wide-eyed little girl with a few problems. She was selectively mute. She also had a speech impediment, which could explain why she didn’t speak very much. She chose not to communicate in any vocal way. She had a word that sounded vaguely like “toilet” (bathroom for my American readers) when she needed to leave the room. She had another word “dink” which I translated as her desire to go to her bag to get a drink. That was about it.
She hadn’t learned more than a few letters of the alphabet in two years of schooling. She could barely write her name and as for being able to read… well, she recognised her own name, her sister’s name and few other words. I knew it was going to be a challenge, seeing I had seven other children with great learning needs as well. At least most of them knew how to communicate orally, but their writing and reading skills were so lacking. The other 20 students were your average garden variety children with only one or two of above average achievement.
I began an intensive programme of reading, writing, listening, stories, poems, speaking activities, drama – whatever my 30+ years of teaching experience could draw upon to help Jennifer and the other students. I won’t even go into details about the Mathematics programme! These students had GREAT needs.
Step by step, one lesson at a time, one little piece of progress and many setbacks along the way. There were many discouragements, but they were offset by little victories, small advances, concepts learned and applied. One of the vital cogs in all of this was journal writing. Daily exercises in writing were adhered to, even when the going was really tough.
Gradually I gained Jennifer’s confidence and she began trying to say more words. It took every ounce of patience I had. Her speech never became perfect but it was enough to give her a start. Over the next 20 months (I had most of the struggling students for a second year) Jennifer made amazing progress. At first she could only speak a word or two that she wanted to write in her journal. I would actually have to write the words for her in her book and she would trace over them. Then it became phrases and finally whole sentences. Her reading began to improve, her spelling improved, her speaking improved and her confidence soared.
Jennifer and her family moved to another town towards the end of the second year in my class. Just before she left Jennifer wrote a journal entry about an event in her family. She wrote, without any help, a whole page. That was her Everest – and she scaled it. But wait – there’s more! Not only did she write that unassisted, it was in beautiful handwriting, with only three or four small spelling errors. It was correctly punctuated with sentence structures that would put to shame some blog entries I have read.
Is that all? No – she then asked to read her writing aloud using a microphone at a school assembly! And she did it!
Do think I was proud of her? You’d better believe it!
It still brings a tear to my eyes when I think about it.
Update March 2017: some time ago I found out that she has graduated from high school and has successfully completed a TAFE course. Wow.
Lessons about blogging
I’ve just read an article about blogging written by Darren Rowse on ProBlogger. It’s been there for a while but it still has many useful tips on how to go about blogging. It’s rather long but well worth reading.
Read it here “18 Lessons I’ve Learned About Blogging.”