Archive for October, 2007

The Adventures of Nancy – a tasty delight

Hi there,

Nancy here again.

It is easy for me to access Grandpa Trevor’s blog at the moment. I’m having a little holiday with him while my Mum goes camping with some friends of hers. He is often busy doing other things so I just sneak in to the office and use his computer.

Yesterday I went out to help supervise Grandma Corinne in her native plant nursery. She needs me to keep her on task. Every now and then I have to go over to her and she rubs my back. This is to remind her that I love her, and that she needs to keep working.

I remembered something special while I was outside yesterday. The last time I came to have a little holiday here I buried a juicy bone. I even remembered where I had put it, so it didn’t take long to dig it up. It was yummy.

Well, it’s time to get back to work again.

Talk to you soon.

Nancy.

Nancy working hard.

Nancy working hard.

Short Story Starters

All writers experience times when the words just do not flow. Ideas seem to fly out the window and are gone forever. You struggle to begin that new story. Some call it writer’s block, to others it may just be a temporary lack of ideas, motivation, momentum or you may just be having an off day. Whatever the cause you have to get back into the writing quickly or, if you are like me, procrastination sets in like a truck of quick drying cement. That often means the writer is stuck for any concrete ideas for the next piece of writing. (Excuse me- I just couldn’t resist that pun.)

Over the last year or so I have been posting a series of Short Story Starters on this blog. These are designed to help struggling writers with ideas. Many readers have found these to be most helpful. Today I will take a different approach. I will give you one way of developing your own story starters.

Alphabetical list

On your screen (or on a piece of paper) make an alphabetical list down the left hand side of the paper. Just write the letters A, B, C, D, E, F and so on. Ten or a dozen will do. You can start at any letter.

Now alongside each letter write the name of a person starting with that letter. For example: Alice, Ben Colin, Denise, Eric, Fiona, Gary and so on.

After each name write about that person. Quickly. Don’t stop to think. Just quickly imagine them in your mind. Write down two or three sentences about that person. No editing at this stage; just write.

Expand your ideas

When you’ve written about each person leave your list for 24 or 48 hours.

Come back to your writing with fresh eyes. Still don’t edit. Choose one that you like. Write another five to ten sentences about that person. Start asking “What happens to this character next?” Your new story is off and running. Keep on developing it.

Some examples:

Alice was always scared of mice. She freely admitted it. Terrified.

Ben could contain his anger no more. “Enough!” He took a deep breath and then calmly explained the process once more.

Colin knew it was going to be a rough day. The wind was already picking up and it wasn’t even eight o’clock.

Denise stopped. Unsure of where she was she looked around for help.

Eric started whistling as he left the building. This was so startling that he stood still, listened to the sparrows chirping nearby, smiled, and started whistling again as he headed for the railway station.

Fiona smiled shyly. She was not accustomed to being praised like this. She felt her face turning red.

Gary spluttered. Had he heard correctly? His obnoxious boss was moving to another company? His attention was now riveted on the speaker at the front of the room.

Developing the idea

I’m going to choose one of the above to expand further:

Colin knew it was going to be a rough day. The wind was already picking up and it wasn’t even eight o’clock. As he rounded to corner of the shed the hot air blasted his face. Already he was sweating and he felt his pulse quicken a little. The sun, already high in the sky, was a glaring orb of fire that seemed to reach right down and touch his face. He entered the Country Fire Service building with a sense of terrible foreboding.

Okay – so that is not brilliant writing and is full of cliches. I can fix that in the editing stage. All I’m interested in at this point is to get the storyline moving, to develop the plot and to flesh out the characters. Time to introduce some other characters and some action.

Now over to you.

Make your list of names, set the scene and off you go.

Good writing.

 

The Adventures of Nancy – leaving home

Nancy at home

Nancy at home

Hi there,

Nancy here again.

Well, I have some exciting news for you. I’ve left home to go on a little holiday. Yesterday Grandpa Trevor and Grandma Corinne came to visit for the day. Mum invited them to visit so that they could meet some friends of hers from England. I was a little shy at first with the house full of strange people but I soon became used to having all those people here. Mum cooked a lovely dinner for everyone. I felt a little lonely during the evening because everyone wanted to talk and talk and talk. No-one wanted to play with me.

I don’t really mind because when the children went to bed I went for a long drive in Grandma Corinne’s car. We drove for over two hours and it was after midnight when we arrived at Grandpa’s house. It was dark so I didn’t see any kangaroos, or sheep or possums, so I curled up on Grandpa’s lap for a sleep on the way to his house.

Soon I will show you photos of what I am doing to keep busy at Grandpa’s place.

Talk to you soon,

Nancy.

Writing Hint #36: Write with music

Some people work better with a musical background. Just observe young people studying to see what I mean.

On many occasions I have some music playing on my computer while I write. I find some music, especially that written by the Masters (Vivaldi, Bach, Tchaikovsky etc) to be not only very inspiring but also very soothing. If you enjoy music -in whatever genre turns you on – use it to inspire and lift your writing to another level. A beautiful piece of music is on the same level as a beautifully crafted sentence or paragraph.

At times, however, I find myself humming or whistling along with the music. Worse still, I start singing the words! That means I am not fully focussed on the writing and have to switch to something else – or switch it off completely.

Use music to help inspire your writing. Find the type of music that will help and not hinder the creative process.

Good writing.

The Adventures of Nancy – Grandpa is coming to visit

Nancy watching through the window

Nancy watching through the window

Hi there,

Nancy here again.

Have you missed me? Let me know in the comments section.

I am so excited.

Grandpa Trevor is coming to visit me. And my Mum as well, of course. I’d better not forget that. Ha, ha. Silly me. I heard Mum talking to him on the phone. He is going to be here about lunch time tomorrow. I’d better keep watching for him through the window. Then when his car stops in the driveway I’ll give a bark so Mum knows they are here.

Oooops. I nearly forgot. Grandma Corinne is coming too. I like sitting on her lap and letting her rub my back. It is really good therapy for her you know. It is very soothing for her to rub me. And I like it too, of course. Sometimes when I am sleeping on her lap she falls asleep too. Ha, ha – her snoring wakes me up!

Well, back to being on watch.

Talk to you soon.

Nancy.