What do you think?
Okay – I’ve been brave enough to post four of my haiku over recent days.
Baring my creative soul, so to speak.
I invite readers’ comments.
What do you think?
Excellent? Good? Average? Could do better? Stinks?
Haiku #4
No Comments »14th May, 2006; Category: Haiku
Seascape on Land
Soft waves ripple-race
On meadow-green luscious grass.
Look! It flows uphill!
© 2006 Trevor W. Hampel
Haiku #3
No Comments »13th May, 2006; Category: Haiku
Desert Landscape
Blazing sun burning
Savagely on parched earth.
Barrenness. Thirst. Death.
© 2006 Trevor W. Hampel
Haiku #2
2 Comments »12th May, 2006; Category: Haiku
Mountain Landscape
Towering mountains,
Deep blue-indented gullies,
Stark red rock at noon.
(c) 2006 Trevor W. Hampel
Haiku #1
Thunder-crumble crash
Of snow-foam spray arching high
Over shining rocks.
© 2006 Trevor W. Hampel