Archive for the 'Poetry' Category

Life is mostly froth and bubble

“Life is mostly froth and bubble,

Two things stand like stone,

Kindness in another’s trouble,

Courage in your own.”

Adam Lindsay Gordon, Australian poet.

I heard this quote last Sunday on the Australia wide radio programme, “Australia All Over.” Someone ringing in to the programme read out the whole poem which was quite beautiful. I have quoted only the last four lines.

These words are not only beautiful, they are heavily ironic when you realise the tragedy of the poet’s life. Adam Lindsay Gordon’s life was mostly “froth and bubble” as he dissipated a large inheritance from his mother on frivolous living. His first love was horses, both in breaking them and in riding them, interests that are strongly represented in his poetry.

As a horseman he received much recognition throughout the fledgling Australian colonies. Coupled with this was a growing reputation as a poet with several volumes to his credit at the time of his death. His interests were broader than this, and he even served a term in parliament.

He evidently had many trusted and supportive friends but even their kindness could not prevent the tragedies of his life. Financial mismanagement, personal loss such as the death of his only child and a reckless approach to many physical activities took their toll. His volume of poetry Bush Ballads and Galloping Rhymes was published on 23rd June 1870. The next morning he took his own life, age 37.

Sadly, the courage he wrote of in the poem I quoted above had deserted him.

Poem #30: A Silent Tomb

A Silent Tomb

A Father’s love –
A gift divine.
Amazing grace –
And it is mine!

Salvation’s cost –
To set me free,
Was His dear Son –
Who died for me.

An empty Cross –
A silent tomb.
I look to Him –
Returning soon!

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Copyright (c) 2007 Trevor W. Hampel.

This poem was first published in Write It in September 1996.

To read more of my poetry click here.

Poem #29 No Guilt

No Guilt

No condemnation.
No guilt.
No shame.

How can this be?

He stood condemned.
He bore the guilt.
He suffered shame.

How can this be?

I was condemned.
Mine was the guilt.
I brought Him shame.

How can this be?

He never sinned.
He did no wrong.
He was perfection.

How can this be?

A soul condemned.
A guilty heart.
A life of shame.

How can this be?

He lived for me.
He died for me.
He rose for me.

How can this be?

A soul set free.
A heart now free.
A life is free.

This is how it can be –

I was set free
Upon a tree
On Calvary!

“There is therefore now no condemnation to those who are in Christ Jesus.” (From Paul’s letter to the Christians in Rome.)

All rights reserved.

Copyright (C) 2007 Trevor W. Hampel

To read more of my poetry click here.

Poem #28 River Red Gums, Lake Hattah

River Red Gums, Lake Hattah

The tree-lined shore
Is reflected in glass –
Smooth water mirroring gums
In their majestic splendour.

Their twisted branches
Reaching out in all directions
Like praying hands
Supplicating the heavens.

Sunset approaches;
Dark green leaves turn
Burnt orange,
Now golden glow.

The final sun-kissed rays
Splash fairy-floss pink
On kingly brows
Ending their day’s reign.

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Copyright 2007 Trevor W. Hampel.

Submitting poetry or fiction to magazines

Yesterday I wrote about the huge number of poetry and fiction e-zines on the internet. These now number in the thousands and more are being added daily. Before this trend on the internet began there were already many thousands of print magazines that accepted poetry and fiction for possible publication. This creates a dilemma for the writer just starting out.

Where do I send my work?

For the inexperienced this can be daunting task indeed. There is so much to chose from. How do I go about it and how do I decide where to send my precious writing? Let me suggest some simple steps to follow. I acknowledge Graham Catt’s article (click here) for many of these ideas.

How to Submit to E-Zines

  1. Research: do your research first. Find or make a list of e-zines and study the list for potential markets for your writing. Make a short list.
  2. Read: read several issues of the e-zines which interest you. This is relatively easy as most are available free on-line.
  3. Check: the credentials of the editors; are they qualified to be editing a magazine or are they just enthusiasts doing this as a hobby?
  4. Analyse: be really objective about the style of the e-zine. Would you feel comfortable having your writing in that magazine? Does the style match your style of writing? Does it have a particular theme or aim? As a silly example, it is useless sending your lovely poem about a cat to a SF magazine (unless the cat is from an alien world).
  5. Frequency: how often does the magazine appear? It may be hard to have your work accepted if there is only one issue per year.
  6. Guidelines: Before sending off your wonderful writing (which you’ve spent many hours rewriting, editing and checking) the last step is to check the Submission Guidelines. These vary from magazine to magazine. If you can’t find the guidelines on the web site, send an email to the editor requesting a copy. Follow the guidelines carefully; ignoring them is a sure way to have your writing rejected.

Submitting to print magazines:

The process outlined above is largely applicable to print magazines as well. It is harder to find back copies of these online so you may have to raid your local library to read them or even subscribe to a few to get a feel for their style. My local Writers’ Centre also has back copies of a wide range of magazines.

It has been said that if everyone who submits their writing to magazines in Australia subscribed to just three magazines, most editors would be able to pay their contributors. I subscribe to nine that are directly related to writing.