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Writing Hint #6 Sentences

In a literary magazine I recently read the following writing hint:

One-word sentences?

Eliminate.

Rubbish!

I disagree.

Strongly.

Short sentences can be very effective. In fact, a variety of sentence lengths can be an indicator of very effective and interesting writing. It can be overdone, of course.

I would rather read short, precise and concise sentences than run-on sentences that never get to the point and meander all over the place, introducing new material that has nothing to do with the original intent of the writer showing that the author is not fully in command of this exacting craft called writing, although some would indeed call it an art, not a craft at all but that is the subject of a post I intend including on this writing blog very soon, when I get the time, of course, with so many projects under way it is a difficult juggling act.

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Writing Hint #5 Use apostrophes correctly

My daughters an English teacher in one of our state high school’s.

She emphatically claim’s to be an “apostrophe nazi.”

She goes around the staff room, office and staff office’s correcting the misuse of apostrophe’s in other people’s poster’s, notices and anything pinned up on the notice boards.

I’m thinking of never going shopping with her again – just in case she decides to go around correcting poster’s and advertising hoardings. That would be most embarrassing.

I recently came across this following hint regarding the use of apostrophes:

Use the possessive apostrophe in it’s place and omit it when its not needed.

One cant be too careful.

I hope my daughter never read’s this or she might find a few mistakes. At least she cant access this blog in order to correct it’s mistakes.

Oh dear – Ive just realised that she could leave comments about this post. Ooops.

I invite you to comment on the above text.

Can you find all the errors?

I think I have made 14 errors. But… I could be wrong!

Writing Hint #4 Don’t waffle

I know I have a problem when I write and when I speak in public.

I have a bad habit of waffling, of going on and on, of rambling and not really getting to the point.

I recently read this wonderful quote:

“Be more or less specific.”

Get to the point.

Keep it concise and precise.

Keep it simple and easy to read.

Drat – there I go again, rabbiting on and on.

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Sixteen Scintillating Short Story Starters

Darren Rowse over at ProBlogger has a group writing project on again this week. He has asked for submissions of lists.

Here is a short list of sixteen super, scintillating, stunning and simply sensational short story starters for writers. Try them. Let me know how they go – and if you get anything published – good luck.

And if you should be blessed enough to get a royalty cheque or two, you can send me a commision for the idea!

Sixteen Scintillating Short Story Starters:

  1. “It was a dark and stormy…” oops – that’s been used before.

Let’s start again…

  1. Harry was puzzled when the door didn’t open.
  2. The headlights were coming straight towards Peter and he couldn’t move.
  3. Only the flimsy wall of my tent separated me from the low rumbling growl.
  4. I was not expecting what was waiting for me just as I rounded the corner.
  5. Rosalie stifled her scream and cowered under the blanket.
  6. Those last few steps seemed the most difficult I had ever made in my life.
  7. As I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face.
  8. It happened so quickly I had no time to think, only react.
  9. Jenny finally became agitated by the monotonous ticking of the ornate clock on the mantlepiece.
  10. John stared open-mouthed as the ball soared majestically over the fence.
  11. Wendy didn’t see the danger ahead.
  12. Paul couldn’t resist shouting out his joy.
  13. The eagle swooped low over the trees.
  14. I didn’t know until that moment that Nell was so afraid of spiders.
  15. Greg closed his eyes, took a deep breath, and jumped.
  16. It was not the birthday gift I was expecting.

Just to show how generous I can be, here is a bonus idea:

  • Suddenly, nothing happened – but it happened suddenly.

Happy writing.

Check out my own short fiction here.

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Update: for a complete list of my short story starters click here.

Writing Hint #3 Prepositions and conjunctions

My wife and I usually agree on most things. There is one matter on which we often clash swords – in a friendly way I might add.

My wife is adamant that it is very bad form to start sentences with a conjunction. I must admit to doing this on many occasions, usually for special effect. And it really riles her. But in my defence, I am not alone in using this writing style.

And this quote says it all:

“Prepositions are not for ending sentences with. And don’t start sentences with a conjunction.”

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